Hey Omar...Nicely done...i like the character and your drawings of course on this blog...but i have some comments if you don't mind..:).
1-he needs a little bit more ups and downs 2-a little bit more jiggle in the belly 3-his left arm must swing a little bit..it's stiff and there is something wrong with it... 4-Overall he needs more weight.. otherwise you did a great job..keep it up and see you at ianimate..:)
Yeah your points are all pretty valid. The arm stiffness and the ups and downs were done conservatively on purpose. Although you still might be right. I think I'll go back to this and see if it works better with your advice, thanks!
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Hey Omar...Nicely done...i like the character and your drawings of course on this blog...but i have some comments if you don't mind..:).
1-he needs a little bit more ups and downs
2-a little bit more jiggle in the belly
3-his left arm must swing a little bit..it's stiff and there is something wrong with it...
4-Overall he needs more weight..
otherwise you did a great job..keep it up and see you at ianimate..:)
Rami D. (Ramimator)
Thanks Rami! I totally don't mind.
Yeah your points are all pretty valid. The arm stiffness and the ups and downs were done conservatively on purpose. Although you still might be right.
I think I'll go back to this and see if it works better with your advice, thanks!
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